The Right Writing

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Words people use too often

I’m not saying to never use these words.  Just make sure that your sentences don’t contain too many of them.

  • That — often put in as a filler word. 
  • Had — same thing.
  • Color words — used lots of times as ways to give something more description.  They often aren’t needed.  If the grass is purple, point it out.  I think I can guess it when the grass is green.
  • Hair — a lot of times, I see a character’s hair described every single time that character is in a scene.
  • Pleonasms — it almost goes without saying.
  • Strife — it’s a decent word that everybody knows, but it leaves a bad taste in my mouth because I never really see it outside of people trying to sound fancy.
  • Doom — It used to be used a lot more, making even minimal usage today sound silly.
  • Neutron — it’s a normal little particle in an atom’s nucleus, not a catch-all term synonymous with magic.

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    When poets rhyme strive with life. I’ve been guilty of it myself, and it just sounds so lazy and awful.
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